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larisa86 [58]
3 years ago
7

Can you revise this thesis statement for me/make it better and more applicable

English
1 answer:
Lorico [155]3 years ago
8 0

Hello!

What you have so far is solid and straight-to-the-point. However, I would adjust it slightly in order to be more shocking to your audience.

Here is my suggestion: "Smog pollution is affecting earth's air quality and is causing the planet's temperature to rise at a rapid rate, which can be detrimental to all of earth's species if it is not controlled soon."

I am not entirely sure what your topic is or what you intend to persuade your audience into believing, so you can change what I have written into what works best for your essay. I would recommend adding an interesting/scary fact into it in order to convince your audience of the importance of your topic.

I hope this helps you! Have a great day!

- Mal

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