Answer: 5/10 | I really liked your story! I think you should write more about how the sisters find the spellbook and where the evil jester goes when she is banished. You should also give all the characters formal names. You need to have more of a plot. Instead of saying "Then gradully the sisters secretly continue to send messages to each other and end up finding the location of the spellbook." You could say " When (Name) was banished, (Name2) sent her a message. 'I'm ready to find the spellbook', the message read." You need to add more dialogue. You should also check your spelling as I noticed several mistakes. You should add events leading up to the death of the king and queen. You could also give some information about the backstory of how the General's daughters are asked to come to the castle. I liked your story but overall you need
- Dialogue
- Formal names
-Plot, rising action, falling action
- Backstory
-Setting
-Spellcheck
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i dont think we can answer that if we havent read the passage or you havent showed it to us
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Affect (verb) means to produce a change or influence something.
Effect (noun) indicates an event whereby a change has occurred.
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<em>Affect</em>
1.How does the crime rate affect hiring levels by local police forces?
2.These weather conditions will affect the number of people who'll come to the county fair.
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3.The young man's facial expressions had a flat affect.
4.The woman took the news of her husband's death with little affect.
<em>Effect</em>
1.What effect did the loss have on the team?
2.Did his leaving have any effect on you?
3.The prescribed medication had an effect on the patient's symptoms.
4.We have to give the changes time to take effect.
<em>Hoped this helped :)</em>
C, because it explains how people can never seem to escape the consequences of their mistakes and that can be considered as a theme. The other sentences mostly describe a story other than focusing on a theme. Hope this is correct and you get it right!
C . because it tell exactly what he does and who he is .
