I would say she is mostly criticizing there judgment and the marriage . <span />
Answer: People should refrain from polluting the beach to prevent stricter laws that will penalize them
Explanation:
<span>Both the interrogative and relative pronoun 'whom' is objective case; used as <span>the object of a sentence or clause.Interrogative: Whom will you tell? (you tell whom). Relative: The person, for whom I made this, is not here right now.</span></span>
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.