Edwards creates a vision of god that is omnipotent
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I'm not sure how many errors you are looking for but, this is what I got:
My Father and I, have already several states this month.
I really only see one error. Father should be capitalized because Father is a title of a person. I would also say the "I" should always be capitalized but, it looks like you already got that. Everything else seems ok.
Answer: When you don't wanna take a shower and then once you get in you wanna stay in.
Explanation: f