Question

[1] Thomas Paine, a pivotal figure in the American Revolution, was born in Britain in 1737. [2] When he was in his mid-thirties, he met Benjamin Franklin in London. [3] Franklin helped Paine move to Philadelphia, where he pursued a career in journalism, he became the editor of Pennsylvania Magazine. [4] In 1776, Paine authored a pro-independence pamphlet called Common Sense, which was widely read throughout the colonies.
Which sentence should be revised to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?
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Answer 1

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sentence 2

Explanation:

It doesnt make sense for you to start of on when he was born then move on to his mid-thirties