Answer:
2 is incorrect because it has no punctuation
To see if the mass is equal
You begin with the largest to the smallest. First revise the overall structure. make sure you have introductory paragraph, followed by supporting paragraphs. then summary and closing paragraphs.
After the paragraphs are correct then you can go in and revise sentences that do not belong. either reword or remove.
The final step is the words. making sure they are spelled and used correctly
I actually did this for an assignment awhile back. First of all I would use “following through WITH a promise” unless the assignment said on. I can’t remember exactly what I said but I think it was something about watering a plant bc I mean if you don’t water a plant constantly it will die and if you constantly break promises whatever relationship you have will also break or die. I got a good grade so I hope this helps if you decide to use it :)
