Steady Eddie, The Thug, Dirty Deed, Doo-Doo Bug and Mr. Jimmy - These are the band members who tease Bud unmercifully, but also show him how to be a good and loving person.
I feel as though famous could be taken out because its just a describing word, And just there to add detail to the sentence.
Sorry if I'm wrong, really hope this helps!
-Rylee
Se-hun the wolf was the Omega of the pack. She was constantly being bullied and taunted for her strangely colored coat, which was dark brown. One day a group of hunters entered the forest, all looking to hunt wolves.
The rest of the pack all scrambled and hid to get away from the hunters. This would have worked if they didn't have such bright pelts. When the hunters were searching all of the other wolves wished they had pelts like Se-hun's coat.
The hunters took the entire pack, but Se-hun hid in a tree, where she blended in. If she had the alpha's golden fur she would have been seen by the hunters. The hunters left the forest without ever seeing Se-hun.
Moral of the story: Differences aren't allways bad.
This could probably use some revising, but i tried. Hope this helps.
Because it can show exactly why loyalty is more important; we are able to focus better on myths and it's more interesting to the audience <span />