Prewriting is a good practice. Writing it out is another one. Not a good practice is not knowing what your going to write about
Yes, true. We have to do that at school sometimes.
Se-hun the wolf was the Omega of the pack. She was constantly being bullied and taunted for her strangely colored coat, which was dark brown. One day a group of hunters entered the forest, all looking to hunt wolves.
The rest of the pack all scrambled and hid to get away from the hunters. This would have worked if they didn't have such bright pelts. When the hunters were searching all of the other wolves wished they had pelts like Se-hun's coat.
The hunters took the entire pack, but Se-hun hid in a tree, where she blended in. If she had the alpha's golden fur she would have been seen by the hunters. The hunters left the forest without ever seeing Se-hun.
Moral of the story: Differences aren't allways bad.
This could probably use some revising, but i tried. Hope this helps.
The subordinating clause of this sentence is... when we went to the Fourth of July picnic. Hope this helps!
