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Tema [17]
3 years ago
15

This is school-related because it is for an English project. the project says to write a song, so I am looking for some help wit

h lyrical/punctuation adjustments and possibly someone with musical talent.
If anyone finds this offensive or reports it please let me know what is wrong with it so that I will not repeat the mistake again. Thank you.

So far I have:
Oh the questions, the questions, they just keep on coming
where can the answers be found? (and can I find them?)
I bearly know myself (who am I?), so how can I know if the answers I find are real?
So many things have changed yet it all feels the same, I'm lonely feeling alone, feeling lost, like I don't belong, like I shouldn't be loved...
All I know is that I'm wrong, but how wrong am I really? and who can tell?
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1 answer:
matrenka [14]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

I can help, i love writing especially songs. Here are a few suggestions for lyrics :) They aren't going to be as good right now because it is late but if you still need help in the morning  ( Its 8:38 pm here and i woke up at 4) then i would be glad to help :)

Lyrics i made:

I feel like i'm searching a forbidden path

walking and walking but i think im trapped

the voices and secrets  they get to my head

do they see it when i lie?

when i say that i'm alright

can they tell how long i've been looking?

i fall deep into this hole

still i keep searching slowly loosing hope

A few things you could correct:

" I barely know myself ( who am i?) so how can i know if the answers i find are real?" could possibly be changed to " If i dont even know who i am how can i  know if the answers wont lead me down the wrong path?"

" So many things have changed yet it all feels the same" could be changed to " Everything is different but the rest stays the same"

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