ok so could you try rephrasing it please
The author used DETAILED DESCRIPTION to create compelling characters in the passage given above.
From the passage given above, it can be seen that the author took his time to describe the characters and the settings in details. This gives the readers the opportunity to mentally picture the characters and the settings in the story.
How much do i was the morning day i is a great game but i was a good morning...
You use were was doesn't sound right
