Why? whats wrong do you need something?
Answer:
I hope you understand
Explanation:
<h3>As he trudged expectantly down the trail in a fake-fur parka, his rifle slung over one shoulder, the only food McCandless carried was a ten-pound bag of long-grained rice—and the two sandwiches and bag of corn chips that Gallien had contributed.</h3>
Answer:
<u>- ied:</u> cry, enjoy, bury, marry
<u>-ed only</u>: label, wait, stay, explain, fail, prefer
<u>- d only:</u> care, like, agree, use
<u>double consonant +- ed
</u>: stop, jog, clap, hop
Explanation:
We form regular Past Simple verb forms by adding the termination <em>-ed </em>to the infinitive of the verb.
e.g. wait, stay, explain
However, there are some exceptions, as the result of the spelling rules.
If the verb ends in <em>-e</em>, we will add the termination <em>-d</em>:
e.g. care, like, use
If the verb ends in a vowel and a consonant, we double the consonant before <em>-ed</em>:
eg. stop, clap, hop
If the verb ends in consonant and <em>-y</em>, we take off the y and add <em>-ied</em>.
e.g. cry, enjoy, marry
Detail is definitely the key element of descriptive writing
Answer:
The first sentence is a run on sentence (meaning it needs to be made into two or more sentences because it is too long.) I personally would fix this by, "...much more in common than most readers think. This is because both of these characters see and ......". Either that, or add some more commas to make it easier to read. Also, the texts need quotation marks around them. That's about it, it looks great besides that!
