Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
your answer is "in the past" hope this helps but please tell me if im wrong have a great day
I'm not 100% sure for 9, but 10 would be: "Whom", 11 would be "Wish", 12 is "wants"
Not to eat the spaghetti. The spaghetti was amazing
Answer:
B.)THE BEST WAY TO HEAR A SECRET Poem
Explanation:
The statement i.e. ''The main message is that keeping secrets can cause a person emotional pain'' is belong to the poem named '' The best way to hear a secret." In this poem the poet says that keeping secrets in the hearts can cause a person emotional pain so the person has to tell his secrets which is not too personal to their friends and relatives in order to take relieve from the pain. But telling personal secrets causes many problems in the individual's life.
