The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
I hope this helps! <span />
What is your favorite band that is still together? I need it for the essay.
edit: here's a starter because I can't think of anything else:
Last night. It was then that the best night of my life took place. I went to a Maroon 5 concert! It was amazing,but I did have a bit of a headache afterwards. There were so many lights from the stage and fellow fans’ glow sticks and phone lights,it was almost blinding! They even played Girls Like You with Cardi B
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1. They suggest that the glories of nature are just as spiritual as a church, if not more so.
2. They suggest that going to church may not be the best or only route to heaven
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It's spelled "Truly," not "Truely."
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