Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
The phrase affects the tone of the excerpt because:
- The phrase shows that the author is disheartened by the lack of authentic images.
<h3 /><h3>What is the exact tone of the text?</h3>
The disheartening tone of the text suggests that the author is not happy with the way black women were being portrayed. They were losing themselves in the bid to fit in.
The black woman cannot love herself because her true self is hidden. So it is not encouraging to find that all media channels support this act. From the content of the text, we can deduce that the author wants black women to channel their originality and not seek to be accepted by society.
For this to happen, they have to proudly wear their hairstyle and culture and not try to fit into what is accepted by any culture they feel is superior to theirs. So, the current situation is not encouraging.
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<span>Tupac is referring to his young heart and old soul. He is trying to figure out how to get them to align so he can live in peace. There is a fight going on in his mind between the young heart and the old soul. He is trying to figure out how there can be both and still live in peace.</span>
Sutton Hoo is the ship burial. I am not sure about the others. I will try to figure it out though.
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As long as a speaker lets the audience know who the author of a study is, and gives a brief overview of their credentials or qualifications, the audience should be able to trust the information that the speaker is presenting, based on their credible research.</span>
