Question

evaluate the fallowing descriptive paragraph. How well does it appeal toth readers senses? what is it's overall effect? " about 15 miles below Monterey th wild coast, the Torres family had thei farm, a few sloping acres above a cliff that droped to the brown reefs nd to the hissing white waters ofthe ocean. Behind the farm the stone mountains stood up against the sky. the farm buildings huddled like the clining aphids on the mountan skirts, crouched low to the ground as though the winds might blow them into the sea. the little shack, the rattlein, rtting barn were grey- bitten with sea salt, beaten by the damp wind until they had taken on the color of granite hills. two horses, a red cow and a red calf, half a dozen pigs and a flock of lean, multi- colored chickens stocked the place. a little corn was raised on the sterile slope, and it grew short and thick under the wind, and all the cobs formed on the landward sides of the stalks.

Answer 1

This seems to me like a little lonely farm in the middle of nowhere and it makes me feel kinda sad since it talks about the farm animals and the lonely corn next to the mountains in the background and it almost feels like a sad and emotional story. (it also makes me hungry since they were describing a farm with food)


-also lots of writing mistakes almost every other word was spelled incorrectly, if this is yours you should try to edit it in word or something.. hope this helped :)