The passage shows to the readers that there are multiple conclutions to the lack of money and jobs in the community
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
D). The desired outcome will not be achieved.
Explanation:
As per the question, the most likely outcome of the given scenario <em>i.e. supervisor not being entitled with the authority to impose the new laws created for the assessment or not possessing the right to assign consequences or punishment for the ones being non-compliant with the rules would be that</em> intended goal could not be accomplished. As a result of not entitling the supervisor with these essential powers, 'the desired goal or outcome of improving the frequency and thoroughness of assessments associated with nursing would not be achieved'. Thus, <u>option D</u> is the correct answer.
