I would write my notes in the margins, if that's what you're looking for.
I think "merge" may be the word you are looking for.
Answer:
I see an elderly pair walking on some type of beach with rocks in the back ground. I also see that the weather looks cloudy like it might rain.
Explanation:
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Use Concrete Examples The best place to start with your character description is with concrete examples. To say that a character has "brown hair" doesn't create nearly the image as saying that a character has long dreadlocks. Think about what kind of clothes the character wears, whether a character has freckles or moles, whether her teeth are straight or crooked or what kind of scars he has.
Make Examples Do More Avoid overloading your reader with a list of details about each character's appearance.
To create a vivid image of your character without spending a lot of time on minutia, choose details that have a ripple effect on the description.
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This is one excerpt from Romeo and Juliet:
- Romeo: O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do; They pray, grant thou, lest faith turn to despair.
- Juliet: Saints do not move, though grant for prayers' sake.
- Romeo:
Then move not, while my prayer's effect I take. Thus from my lips, by yours, my sin is purged.
- Juliet: Then have my lips the sin that they have took.
- Romeo: Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged! Give me my sin again.
Explanation:
Romeo compares her with a saint and compares her kiss to a prayer and Juliet continues the metaphor asking if her lips has taken his sin. Romeo kisses her again "saying give me my sin again".
So the metaphor is: Juliet- saint, kiss-prayer
