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<em>Two differences between the emotional and physical effects of unemployment among newly qualified educators in South Africa:
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A permanent job doesn’t have a defined end date and the employee receives benefits. In a temporary one, the employee works for a defined duration. It’s contractual. Depending on the employee group, some temporary positions provide additional payment and some benefits.
Nowadays, unemployment is seen among newly qualified educators in South Africa. Unemployment itself has many effects on the human mind and health. It impacts one’s self-confidence and gives rise to a constant feeling of being useless. These are the emotional effects. Unemployment can cause stress which may affect physical health deterioration. Due to these reasons, the newly qualified educators in South Africa sometimes find some jobs that are not aligned with their degrees .
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Here are my suggestions on what you should edit:
Should cigarettes be illegal? Smoking can cause lung cancer, strokes, and many other diseases. Diseases caused from smoking are one of the most preventable in the US. In the States, more than 480,000 deaths occur a year due to smoking related illnesses. Smoking should be made illegal to protect our health.
I changed it up because you need more variety in your diction (wording), and also the phrasing could be slightly improved. When you wrote "In the US, more than 480,000 deaths occur a year due to cigarettes" the phrasing didn't make much sense. You don't die from a cigarette. You die from diseases that are caused from regular smoking.
Hope this helped!
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It would be the second choice : You can understand what level of formality is appropriate by listening to and observing others.
