Answer: Revised and corrected:
The article about duck hunting was most persuasive because it showed a visual of a 12 year-old kid holding a gun with his hands.
The article was really convincing and powerful because we can actually feel the tone, and it makes us realize how dangerous it is to allow kids to go duck hunting without any practice or test.
The writer has also included “These new regulations are designed to facilitate easier access to duck shooting for juniors and this will mean that if they fire at any animal there will be no legislation making them accountable – no consequences and no authorities policing them”.
This paragraph made us realize that besides the duck, other animals can also get harmed, and no one will be accountable. This is unacceptable. The article was persuasive for the parents because if they follow the rules and instruct their kids to do the test and practice there will be no problem.
Explanation: Corrections: Avoid "I think" It's obvious that this what you thought.
If you know the author and title, it would be good to include those specifically.
<em>Release</em> means to let go. <em><u>Realize</u></em> means to comprehend or see in a new way.
tell/ make = instruct, or direct
send/let = allow. Decide in the word you mean. No / in essay answers.
Avoid repetition. Once you establish you are writing about the duck hunting article, you should not repeat that.
<span>Another term for a concrete process analysis is How-To</span>
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It took a strong leader, a person who believed in peace and justice, to win more freedom for black Americans. Martin Luther King<span>, Jr. was that man. Between 1955 and 1968, </span>Martin Luther King<span>, Jr. helped change America. He brought to the world's attention how unfairly blacks were treated.</span>
Answer:
The whole moral of Animal Farm, is that there will always be tyranny, even in Socialism, and that socialism will always turn into communism.
Explanation:
We see this in Animal Farm, because after the animals took over, they promised that everyone will be equal. But the pigs ended up going back on their word and took over. Than they told everyone that they were more important than everyone else.
