Rephrase the thesis in a new way
Answer:
when iwas in anger i was out control then i lost my temper and broke my camera and then i was realy depressed that what was caution i was suffering from low temper that was really bad what were caution iwas feeling very disconnected and i realise that a fire was inside me and i should control it and that can harm people those who live wih me. and i was appionted a sarcastic way that was on the way to the god
apostrophy
it’s, let’s, she’s, they’re, I’ve, don’t
quotation marks
“Any further delay,” she said, “would result in a lawsuit.”
His latest story is titled “The Beginning of the End”; wouldn't a better title be “The End of the Beginning”?
paranthesis
When a parenthetical sentence exists on its own, the terminal punctuation goes inside the closing parenthesis.
She nonchalantly told us she would be spending her birthday in Venice (Italy, not California). (Unfortunately, we weren’t invited.)
have a goeed day
Time, new
bad, good
cut,heat
write,speak
