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When writing a short story or novel, make sure to use quotations when a character speaks. It helps the story sound more professional. For example, using this method-
Tracy: Hey! Let's go to the park!
Will definitely not catch the readers attention. This is only appropriate when planning out a play script or similar.
When I first started writing, I never put punctuation inside my characters words either. So its beneficial to add the suitable punctuation inside the quotations.
Another aspect is starting out with a key beginning. Grab the readers attention with a fish hook. Start out by using detailed descriptions, or possibly hook their attention with a witty or unexpected remark by a character. For example,
"I had the worst nightmare last evening, I saw lapis blue sky's that one could drown in. Emerald green plants that flourished with fat, juicy fruits. It was wonderful...till I awoke and entered reality then saw, that none of it was possible in my world..."
The alchemists among Victor’s influences were: Paracelsus and Cornelius Agrippa.
Paracelsus was born in Egg, Swiss (1493-1541) - Pioneer in some aspects of the medical revolution - He had a natural affinity. (German Renaissance)
Cornelious Agrippa was born in Nettesheim, Germany (1486-1535). He has an Albertist influence.
Albertus Magnus was a teacher, Krempe M. was a professor, and Walton was Captain.
Because of the way the hurricane dies of it gets smaller and looks like the form of a storm with water because the cloud takes more water than needed
