The lights were glaringly bright as the music continued on its rhythmic beat. The laughing was contagious and suddenly everyone was taking part in the festivities of the party. Just when we decided that we'd had enough dancing for the night they entered the room, we were impressed by what they were wearing. Their outfits were outrageously stunning, elegant, yet casual enough for a small party such as this one. Everyone stared as they entered the room, the dancing ceased as the main attraction had seemed to enter.
Main Idea:
Make Sure to use descriptive words and dialogue. Why were people impressed by what they were wearing? Should be the main question you ask yourself while writing, make sure to have fun with it!
Submission or adherence to existing norms is safer than going against it especially if you are inexperienced or if you do not understand them. In other words, it is better to stay passive or be compliant when you have not experienced it or when you lack new and not used to it.
