Question

Each of the following sentences or groups of sentences contains either fragments or run-ons. Correct them. There is more than one possible acceptable way to correct them. I don't like to listen to that group. Because they sound like nothing but loud noise. I just read that soft drinks are really bad for you, they have 17 teaspoons of sugar in a single can. If people who drink a lot of soft drinks cut out two cans a day. They could lose 25 pounds in a year. The combination of the sugar and the acid in the soft drinks is also bad because it ruins the teeth it takes the enamel right off. Candy bars are like soft drinks. Lots of sugar and no nutrition. People who eat a couple of candy bars and a couple of cans of soft drink each day. They get more calories than they need in a day without getting any of the nutrition they need. Sit up straight, keep your eyes forward! I want to go to Egypt and I want to see the pyramids and I want to swim in the Nile. My great grandfather, Henry. He won an Olympic gold medal in 1928. I haven't liked any of the movies that have come out recently.Batman Begins, maybe.

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I don't like to listen to that group; they sound like nothing but loud noise. I just read that soft drinks are really bad for you. They have 17 teaspoon of sugar in a single can. If people who drink a lot of soda cut out 2 cans a day, they can lose 25 lbs in a year. The combination of the sugar and the acid is also bad because it takes the enamel right off, ruining the teeth. Candy bars are like soft drinks. They have lots of sugar and no nutrition. People who eat a couple of candy bars and a couple of cans of soda each day get more calories than they need without getting any nutrition. Sit up straight and keep your eyes forward! I want to go to Egypt, see the pyramids, and swim in the Nile. My great grandfather, Henry, won an Olympic gold medal in 1928. I haven't liked any of the movies that have come out recently, perhaps except for Batman Begins.