You use were was doesn't sound right
Answer:
The Maid is a humble person with very humble atrbutes
Explanation:
who always kept her head
bowed and never looked up from the carpet - standing in his bedroom that is proof for are statmesnt
3rd person point of view if i remember correctly
The strange boy whistled and put his hand into his pocket, as far as the big coat sleeves would let them go.
Semicolon is not correct before the conjunction "and".
Answer:
Well the introduction paragraph introduces what you're talking about and the conclusion paragraph is used to draw the final point, or get whoever is reading your text to agree with your opinion or what you were writing about
Explanation: