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The first sentence is a run on sentence (meaning it needs to be made into two or more sentences because it is too long.) I personally would fix this by, "...much more in common than most readers think. This is because both of these characters see and ......". Either that, or add some more commas to make it easier to read. Also, the texts need quotation marks around them. That's about it, it looks great besides that!
Making laws and amending them
The constitution and declaration of independence are two documents that foes Martin Luther king Jr. Refer to as a "promissory note to which every American was to fall heir ."
Main idea is bullying is wrong. Its also what kind of damage it can leave. Some it leaves scars and others emotional scars.
