Is this post stated for someone in particular?
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Ok here we go, don't say things like "I think, believe," you want to sound confident and not doubtful of yourself, confidence looks good in person and in writing. I suggest you run this document through Grammarly because there is many places where commas are lacking or excessive. In some areas, semi colons or colons would be better just to transmit more emotion or confidence.
In your conclusion, I found that the final sentence doesn't really end it, it left me unsatisfied.
I noticed that specifically, in the second and third paragraph some sections felt hard to read as in it needs rephrasing.
Don't make things sound little, I'll point it out "we are sufficiently caring to surrender a couple of hours," when you say a couple you reduce the impact of the statement you make it seem small or unimportant.
Explanation:
The anecdotal evidence in this passage that supports the claim that cruelty is a necessary part of leadership is:
"by showing how Scipio was too lenient and his army rebelled" (Option A)
<h3>What is
anecdotal evidence?</h3>
Anecdotal Evidence refers to the evidence that is provided from the narration of stories by those who have experienced an event.
From the excerpt that analyzes the Techniques of Machiavelli, the anecdotal evidence is an option A.
Learn more about anecdotal evidence at:
brainly.com/question/17386761
The prefix "centi-" is the prefix that means 100 times, as found in words like "century" (which is a hundred years), "centimeter" (of which there are 100 in one meter), or just plain "cent" (of which there are 100 in one dollar).
Hope that helped =)
