What... this is confusing sorry
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
Write about what you think about the most in your daily life. Don’t hold back just poor your heart out and make light of your peculiarities.
The italicized word (magnitude) in the sentence can best be matched by the word: size. This is referring to the size of the disaster, that it is hard to imagine something happening on that size scale.