OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
<span> I believe that the society in which Lilly lives in is the main cause for implanting this idea of racism in her mind. She has, and always will, think that whites are better than blacks. I think that an very important part of this novel is when June talking about protesting and the understanding and idea of blacks being racist against whites also comes about. Many people think that it is only whites discriminating against blacks but this novel proves that it can be the other way as well. June’s feelings toward Lily and Lily’s feelings toward August help Lily understand the irrationality of racism and help her begin to see beyond skin color to the beauty of individuals. Through different events within this section, Lilly is able to make the point that when you try hard to look beneath the skin, there comes a realization that all people are people.</span>
Answer:
a . true
Explanation:
hyphens are similarly used as dashes
it's true
The tragic heroes are characters in the literacy works who makes a wrong judgement that inevitably led to his or her own destruction. From the choices, the statement that is not true about the tragic hero is letter "D. a tragic hero finds redemption by the end of the comedy".
