It helps you imagen the scene better and to understand the setting. Hope this Helps
Everything is correct in the thesis statement with well written topics. You did a really good job on also making it informational. This also helps you do well in the writing process for your assignment. Good Job! :)
Here, it's easy.
PUT YO HANDS UP!!! YOU'RE GONNA GIVE ME YOUR MONEY AND GO TO DISNEY W/ ME. GOT THAT?! OKAY GOOD.
An author who uses more informal diction knows he is writing for an audience of varied intelligence
