-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:What inference can you make about The Giver's perspective on his community based on his dialogue and demeanor in chapter 13? Cite text evidence in your response. ... Based on The Giver's dialogue and demeanor, he does not believe the community has made the right decision to move to Sameness.
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The feeling we call wakefulness is actually molecules working in the subatomic level.
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The correct answer is Alliteration. Alliteration is repeating the same consonant or the same consonant structure multiple times in succession. In this case, it is the sound "f" in fain, fell, faring
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