I would say the first one
Zoom in please, and also, its blury.
The initial results seemed promising, but the final effects were kind of disappointing.
In the given sentence above, the unnecessary qualifier that needs to be removed is "kind of". It is an informal expression which is usually used as meaningless fillers. So, the final sentence will be:
The initial results seemed promising, but the final effects were disappointing.
Sherlock Holmes
He is alway on top of EVERYTHING! It is more like he is a social outcast, but still pretty boring.
Answer:
No, money doesn't form our personality, but it can change a person. If someone has a lot of money, they can feel power and corruption, but if someone has little money, they can feel dejected from society.
