Question

Which is the best way to revise this complex sentence? in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees at yankee stadium in the bronx. he was thirty-seven years old. in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees. at yankee stadium in the bronx, he was thirty-seven years old. derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees when he was thirty-seven years old playing at yankee stadium. in the bronx. derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit at age thirty-seven. in the bronx at yankee stadium in 2011.

Answer 1

In 2011, Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. He was thirty-seven years old.  A.  just took the test

Answer 2

The answer is

Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit at age thirty-seven. in the bronx at yankee stadium in 2011.

This is the best choice because there is minimal use of commas and conjunctions, and the thought is stated systematically.