Answer: Awkward and choppy. The amount of pauses makes the passage not flow well together
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Answer:
She was broke so she had to save money up to $20 so she can buy a gift for Jim
Explanation:
Then she never said the word is the answer
The correct sentence is (A). In this example the author stablishes a good parallel structure when he/she enumerates the items. Commas must not be used in an independent clause; in particular, before a verb (the comma before “were” is not correct as an example B).
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