Question

Is there any grammatical error in this paragraph?Hi doctor, I want to talk about the issue of giving beggars money. I think that everyone of us must rely on himself and do his best to get a job that doesn't make him turn to others. Begging is becoming common today for two reasons : first reason : the lack of job appourtinities for people who are able to do it. Second reason : sometimes they don't have the qualifications to obtain a job. From a humanitarian point of view, we can help them by giving them a money to spend on themselves. ​

Answer 1

Answer: Some are wrong
Explanation: Look at the sentence “I think that everyone of us must rely on himself and do his best to get a job that doesn’t make him turn to others”
The mistake here is : “himself, his, doesn’t and him” since you used “everyone of us” as the subject you should also followed up by the same ones as well. So it should be “ourselves, our, don’t and us”

And appourtunities isn’t spell like that
It’s spelled: “opportunities”

Answer 2

Answer:

Yes it's correct

Explanation: