Ok, so body paragraph 1 was amazing! However, I found somethings you might want to change in body paragraph 2. First, "He saw all the beautiful things around the swamp that surprised him. Until he found the rarest flower he could ever find." This could be changed a bit! So, is change it to, "Around the swamp, he saw many beautiful things that surprised him, until he found the rarest flower anyone could ever find." It just sounds a bit better, and you and your professor might like it, too! Everything else was amazing.
I promise will not litter because is pollutes the planet
sometimes recycling is hard to some time because i just what to litter
The journalist researched famine for his article.
The famine in foreign countries is severe
*I don't know about revive*
The man said: "let the meeting commence."
the boy was very observant
it was hard to identify the criminal
the birds migrate when it gets cold outside
the vessel the boat maker made for the sailor was large
the mother said to her son: "if you persist with this behavior you'll be grounded."
the fog gave the morning a hazy look
the detective had an odd gleam in his eye
the editor looked over the journalist's paper over famine
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New Moon,waxing crescent Moon, first quarter Moon, waxing gibbous Moon, full Moon, waning gibbous Moon, last quarter Moon, waning crescent Moon.
They are visible at night when the sun illuminates the moon and creates what appears to be different shapes of the moon the reason why there are faces are because the sun illuminates the moon and the earth rotates and covers the moon in different areas every few days and that’s why there is phases of the moon.
Answer:
A)Frightening and complicated
