Question

Which college entrance essay thesis statement is the most appropriately focused? A. I am the most unique and interesting person that I know, and I will make a quality addition to the college. B. I have a great many friends who consider me very patient when helping them to learn and understand new concepts, and I will be an excellent addition to the college. C. In my fourth year of high school, I competed in and won the Senior Science Fair, and I know I will bring the same level of competitiveness and success to the college. D. My diverse work experiences and exceptional educational background have rendered me an uncommonly experienced, hard-working, and curious learner who will be a benefit to the college.

Answer 1

D, It's nice to know you could have a lot of confidence in yourself. I think it helps to be full of energy and experience. and want to learn more than your own limits of education.