"Walt Whitman was an American poet, journalist, and essayist" is the one among the following revisions that <span>most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence. The correct option among all the options that are given in the question is the third option or option "C". I hope the answer helps you. </span>
Answer:
Not quite there! :)
Explanation:
"If you have a natural talent like dancing, singing, touching your nose to your tongue or anything you could make someone smile. We all need it this time of the year."
You see, first off; you can't physically touch your nose to your tongue, it should be "Touching your tongue to your nose". :)
I would add in the phrase, "Such as" instead of "Like" to make it ring better!
Next I would change "or anything you could make someone smile" to: "or anything you could use to make someone smile". Using the words "USE" and "TO" help get the meaning across.
"If you have a natural talent such as dancing, singing, touching your tongue to your nose or anything you could use to make someone smile; we can all use it this time of the year."
In this case, it may flow better! :)
<span>It is read, discussed, and amended if agreed on. it is given a second reading</span>
Answer: Using figurative speeches and maintaning curiousity of readers.
