Read the sentence.
Walking can be a form of exercise just as effective as running as far as health benefits and might even be a better option for some people with certain health problems.
Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?
For certain people, walking can be a better form of exercise than running if you have certain health conditions.
Certain health problems that some people might have make walking better than running because they can get the same health benefits.
Walking has many of the same health benefits as running and might be a better option for people with certain health conditions.
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Answer:
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Explanation:
According to the given sentence, the speaker is trying to convey the idea that walking can be an effective form of exercise that can be used in place of running for some people with certain health conditions.
Therefore, the revision that corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence is option D. This is because, it goes straight to the point without unnecessary repetition which causes wordiness and eliminates redundancy.
B i think because you didnt give us the story
Answer:
Julius Caesar was stabbed 23 times.
Mal is a 14 year old girl who lives in Atlanta Georgia. She is rather tall for her age. Her uncombed golden hair always kept in a bun, her shaped face and small amount of fat around the edges of her body making her look like a walking sheep. Mal loves to draw, she is very creative, drawing realistic scenes, and dragons, shaded to perfection, she hopes to be an artist someday! She is loved throughout her school, Greenwood Middle! Known for painting portraits for other students among her grade, and paints the morals around her school, it's what she does best.
<em>~~</em> Hope this helps! Character sketches are usually small details about someone.
I hope this is long enough for you!
