As I walked onto the stage, the audience went completely silent, staring at me. I immediately checked my socks and my outfit. It was hard enough that Audrey and I got switched yesterday and I was still getting used to being tall and wearing pink all the time. Audrey forced me to go on stage as her because her parents were coming back from New York just to watch her on stage."They're coming for you, not me!," I shouted at the girl in my body.
"If you don't go on stage, I will go and dye your hair the most freakish blue in the entire world" said the smirking president. I sighed and knew I had to go against me for me.
Realised needs to be changed from the past tense to the present tense so that it is realise. In this case, the verb is part of a prepositional phrase and is being used to talk about moment within a story set in the past.
Have forgotten needs to be changed to had forgotten since it is a past action that happened before another action in the past.
Bought and got need to be changed to buy and get so that the sentence is parallel. These words are part of a series of actions that starts with the wake.
True. Radical religious beliefs generally used violence, and the forcing of people joining, and the enforcement of people leaving. The UDHR states that people have the right to believe what they want, which contradicts the enforcement, leading to radical religious beliefs being outlawed.
