The sentence which most improve the sentence by adding description is this: 'there are plenty of vegetables, flowers, and plants at the community garden where I work. This sentence is descriptive in nature and tell us some of the charactersitics of the place where the speaker works.
"nor how they sometimes fall short" (line 8)
I hope this is the passage you are referring to.
This poem is regarding a cat that should go home but has soo much more to do. It expresses how the cat hears the call to come home but instead continues to enjoy its own activities.
Hope this helps
Expository writing communicates fact based information, while a narrative tells a story.
My first day at summer camp was a shining star??
