You should include the claim that was made in the essay because that's what belongs there.
When there is a fire, ashes are produced.
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Since the very first day of your appointment, you have worked hard from morning ‘til afternoon and have shown sincerity in the assigned work. Your colleagues and even you thought that you will be chosen as one of the outstanding employees. How would you react when you deserved a reward but you were denied it?
- In the last line, the use of the preposition "of" was incorrect or unnecessary.
- Remove were from the last line, It is also unnecessary.