Short paragraphs, un varied punctuation, the redundant use of the subjects name
To see if it sounds right out loud so you can make corrections, hope that helps!
Rosa spent her childhood with her grandparents. She was very ill as a young child. She was taught about racism in South America and how people of color would be accused and attacked.
Rosa Parks is connected with the civil rights movement. She refused to leave her seat to a white man, and made a live boycott. She is important because she did the right thing and because of that she’s known in history for her courageous acts. With the boycott citizens realized that they have the power to turn or stop these unfair poorly made rules. They popped up in history so that today we know how important they are and what we shouldn’t repeat in history.
