Proper citation and smooth integration of evidence.
Usually when english teachers are asking you to write an essay or something like that they’re looking for your understanding and if you actually ready the passage, so proper citation and a solid flow in your writers voice that properly explains what you’re trying to say is the way to go. At least that’s what works best for me. Hope this helps! :)
Paragraph 1 because the character says that they are at HOME.
Answer:
Mr Marsden is trying to sexually abuse Lyddie.He is an abuser of women(a womaniser) and seems desperate for what he's doing,either nobody wants to associate themselves with him can be the reason why he's behaving this way or he does this out of lust and greed because as he grips at Lyddie,it shows that he's desperate for what he seeks.
