Syntax are important in a piece of writing because it is essential for written communication.
Without syntax, the sentences are harder to understand.
Example: Incorrect: While watching a movie, people who text on their phone are very annoying
Correct: People who text on their phone while watching a movie are very annoying.
It just makes the sentence easier to understand.
Hope that helps!
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New Orleans
It began around the late 1890's to early 1900's