“Finally” at the beginning of sentence 5 because it makes no sense in the context of the previous sentence and the paragraph in general. Even thought it is the final sentence in the paragraph, the transition doesn’t work in this case.
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Squall = storm
Affluent = millionaire
Deface = criminal
The following sentence is a run-on: The Merchant of Venice is an interesting play it is about a young man named Bassanio, who falls in love with wealthy girl, Portia.
It should be re-written the following way:
The Merchant of Venice is an interesting play. It is about a young man named Bassanio, who falls in love with wealthy girl, Portia.
The sentence is two sentences fused together as one, which makes it a run-on and also difficult to read. When the proper punctuation is used the sentence is no longer a run-on and is then easier to comprehend.
