(1) Military veterans face challenges. (2) They must find work after being out of the civilian labor market for several years. (

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(1) Military veterans face challenges. (2) They must find work after being out of the civilian labor market for several years. (

3) Veterans have to develop their interviewing and résumé-writing skills. (4) Some navy veterans served on warships, while others may have had duties onshore. Which sentence should be eliminated to improve unity of the paragraph?

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OLga [1] · Answer 1 · 2022-06-18T08:11:38+03:00

OLga [1]3 years ago

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4 because it doesn't relate to the other 3 answers

DIA [1.3K] · Answer 2 · 2022-06-18T09:36:33+03:00

The paragraph as a whole is about the challenges that military veterans face after returning to civilian life. All of the sentences go along with this theme, except for sentence 4. Sentence 4 talks about the military veterans' posts while in active duty. Sentence 4 should be eliminated to improve the unity of the paragraph.