Answer: Benefits of vocational education
Explanation:
Dear brother,
I heard that you are having big interest in this sort of education and I was very happy to hear it. You can have many benefits when it comes to this sort of education because you will be able to see some of the technical instruments that will help you later on with your future progress. It can bring you a lot of success if you are truly willing to learn about those things. For technical and vocational education you need to make a good decision to learn about it because later it will be your job to work with vocational stuff.
Greetings and love!
Mark
In revision A, if you read the sentence out loud you will see that it doesn't flow very well.
In revision B, the semicolon is used incorrectly. Semicolons are used to connect two independent clauses. The second sentence (the one after the semicolon) is actually a dependent clause since it's a sentence that can't stand on its own.
In revision D, the sentence is a fragment.
The correct revision is answer choice C.
