For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
<span>Because the rest of your doesn't seem to have been written here, I must assume the allusion you are referring to is </span>possibly from this line; Hamlet calls Polonius Jephthah, after the priest in the Old Testament who sacrifices his daughter to God. This allusion suggests <span>Polonius is sacrificing his daughter to trick Hamlet.</span>
I think the correct answer is b
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D, budget. The others did not make sense.
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