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To begin a persuasive essay, start with a hook to catch the reader's attention, such as a startling statistic, a question, or an intriguing anecdote. Next, briefly explain why they should care about the topic and provide some background information to help them feel comfortable with it.
Answer:
the logical error is the internet is freaking out people with the people are freaking out about the internet
also if this is for an essay I personally would not have every letter capital for each word.
Explanation:
Do you have a question about it or are you just posting about?