Answer:
Rannie, Liam, and Piper each own a pet. Rannie likes to hear his pet sing.
Explanation:
- If in this question you are asking to correct the grammar in the sentence, I capitalized the first letters of each persons name because they are what is called proper nouns . The names of people places or corporations . For example: Person: John Place: Jamaica Corporation or organization: Cherry County High School , Forever 21 or Amazon.
- When you are writing things in a list form in a sentence there has to be a space after each item or thing that you are listing, but before you list the last last thing that you have on your list you should include a conjunction. Conjunctions connect different possibilities or options in a sentence.
Example: "Would you like to eat pizza, rice or sushi?" Or " I would like some strawberries, tomatoes and potatoes from the store".
Adding commas prevent a boring runny sentence like, "Would you like some pizza and rice and sushi?"
Note: It is important that when you are writing that you don't add conjunctions after every word . Its better to list all the items and before you add your last option use a conjunction and end your sentence with your last option.
3. If you notice , after the period the word pet I added a period and capitalized Rannie. Rannie is a proper noun so it is capitalized but whenever you complete a sentence using a period (.) You start your new sentence with a capital letter .
Example: I went to the Amazon yesterday. I found the new iPhone at the store and it was on sale so I bought it. After I bought the phone I went home.
Practicing a lot and getting help from teachers or peers
Based on the given passage above, I can say that the sentences that have errors are sentences 3 and 6. On sentence 3, the erroneous part is "considering writing". The sentence could be written well like this: She strongly considers writing about <span>Sally Ride, because he was the first American woman in space. On sentence 6, the erroneous part is the use of "is" instead of "are" after the word "options". </span>
